Evaluating my title sequence
I think I'm nearly there, but there are still so many things that need correcting/changing :
Missing assets - Star's eyes
Timing between star leaving frame and moon entering - Not in sync with the music.
Transition between night scene and day scene - Needs to be quicker, at the moment there is a strange slow pause...
Clouds moving upwards to simulate impression of falling cow - gap in between groups of clouds...
Mushroom can still be seen through the caterpillars body - Need to reformat the assets so that they are one object.
Hearts don't appear quickly enough or in sync with the music.
Not sure that caterpillar enlarging that much makes any sense, and moves too slowly.
The flow of the animation looses momentum here and the viewer will loose interest.
Words could be animated more at the end - How do they leave the frame?
Stray heart doesn't quite leave frame......
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